When I was sitting in the car driving to the airport there was a small spider just crawling around on the seat next to me and I would just inch closer to the door until the spider gets closer then I start crying to my parents about the spider. But my father would always say that the spider can sense my fear so it would come closer and might even attack. So I would just sit back in my seat trying to calm myself down and over come my fear.
Finally we reached the airport we were travelling to Belgium for the Christmas holidays and it took 8-10 hours from China to Belgium. But I was happy to arrive in Brussels safely because of the hard snow but we still had to drive to Antwerp to stay with my grandparents and their house is really old and it's filled with spider which I was afraid of. But once my father told me that these spiders are the common house spiders, the daddy long legs and they're harmless and if you get scared just sing the itsy bitsy spider song.
Now I've overcome my worse fear and learnt to enjoy my life with or with out spiders but I'm still a bit freaked out about big, huge, hairy spiders.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your story because you made it very clear on how you were afraid of spiders. I liked that you sang the itsy-bitsy spider song and I thought it reassured you. I'm still afraid of spiders and the next time I see one, I'll have a way to let go of my fear like you did. When you said "But I was happy to arrive in Brussels safely because of the hard snow but we still had to drive to Antwerp to stay with my grandparents and their house is really old and it's filled with spider which I was afraid of", I felt as it there was someone in my head just saying that sentence really fast. Maybe next time you could make pauses in your sentence and put commas. I could see that you worked hard on this and put a lot of effort. I really enjoyed this and I am looking forward to reading another blog post of yours!
This is such a great story about facing your fear. But still there are some errors like on second paragraph it says, "then I start crying to my parents about the spider," but it could have been better if you said, "then I started crying infront of my parents because of the spider." Your pictures are very interesting though next time add email, where you got it. You had written a very interesting paragraph and I thought it was good because I could picture the spider crawling next to you beside your seat. Keep this work because ITS REALLY GOOD!!!
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